Maybe post some movies that suit your style/what you are looking for?
by transitions i was referring to the cuts yes, they seem to go a little crazy on quicktime, probably just since the quality has being reduced? I like...
Its a good effort for your first short film, my favourite bit was where driver was told to stay in the car, before the bar scene. However i noticed so...
Defianately upgrade camera first so you are shooting onto DV, if you can afford it in your budget. And then you will probably need a tripod at minimum...
yea the 'fair use' should cover me. Thanks for that.
probably just a short section of music would be better.
i would also love to have a read of them if you wouldnt mind sending to: latexglove?hotmail.com
if you have camera support and lighting covered you could pull it off.
where abouts in Australia?