My source was Lloyd Kauffman's book "MAKE YOUR OWN DAMN MOVIE which says on page 91: "And speaking of naked, if a part in your script requires a nu...
I do not have actual experience in this but I have read about it so i'll spit out what I remember. (1) Have a female present as a witness if nothing e...
Regarding the hot waitress. I've been thinking you need a female lead in there. She's the most likely unless you have other ideas. She should be th...
You could have them playing strip poker and the one character is losing and betting his girlfriends clothes. The other one is very conflicted about th...
With a lot of help. Bosh, it was your idea that started the chain. Your idea is what they call high concept. Martial arts school uses questionable CIA...
I think your additions work seemless with the stuff I've been thowing out there so hopefully you'll be able to use some stuff. Old British flak jacket...
Two characters plus an extra without any lines. First character, we'll call him Gilligan. He's bluffing. He doesn't have the money to lose and has ...
I believe in the US you risk a charge of "brandishing a weapon" if someone misinterprets what's going on. Having a cop around prevents that. The gu...
Another idea that might be funny is to have the normal students chased off by the competing Dojo, leaving our heros dead in the water when they get ou...
Having them think he's dead and then having him come back at the end could work really well. It lightens up the end and of course he led the CIA into ...
Now you're talking. Sort of Shangahi Soccer meets Enter the Dragon. I'm gonna blabber here so take what you like (if any) and dump the rest. The...
I actually don't know much about treatments, format wise and all, but story is story and character is character so I'll comment as I go. If I ask o...
Dont take this the wrong way but i would have thought someone with a name as yours would understand that. I tend to not take things the wrong way. ...
"Guess doormen are different than bouncers which in the US are unregulated as far as I can tell. In the US they need to be big, generally dumb, and be...
If you really are offended by a suggestion that confusion over your name might cause people to take your work less seriously than I don't know what to...