You might want to add in some of the flashback because that provided the motivation. Start with the car crash. Then jump back to the flashback. Show t...
One way to do it. Sort of. Basically create a matte painting out of one of the movie frames. (1) Set up the shot with the actor on the left, and th...
It is much cleaner now. You said you'd repeat it like Run Lola Run so I'll leave plot/motivation issues aside beyond the comment that a murder/suicide...
If you are looking for someone to get hit with the bat: (1) Shoot with the batman between the victim and the camera. Put them 10 feet apart if you ...
Voiceover is simply writing dialogue but adding VO after the characters name. That way the character can speak in in the scene normally as well as do ...
<em>For example: EXT. DENISE?S PLACE - TERRACE - DAY or: EXT. DENISE?S PLACE/TERRACE - DAY </em> This is a good example of pr...
Titles can be important, especially if you don't have a big star to make your project stick in peoples minds. That is a pretty good title actually. It...
Do you have facilities to do ADR work? If so you might not kill yourself over the sound. I've heard nearly 60% of sound is often redone in the studio...
You might try to make one of ice (colored black I guess). You also might try plaster or something. Use a plastic toy bat, cut off the end and use t...
It's good but none of the motivations come out for Sylvester or Kate or why either girl would want to be with a poor homicidal musician who doesn't ca...
I had this problem long ago, I don't know if I had the same problem you're experiencing but with me it basically came down to older DVD players were n...
Very nicely done, the one change I would make is when the door is crushing the guy you cut to a shot of the guy, and its very blurry, followed by a sh...
Trailer voice is good. So did everyone have 48 hours to make the trailer? Did they shoot the movie in 48 hours? How about a little more info. It...
Are you sure about Robert Rodriguez? I'm guess here but I'd add Clint Eastwood to the list as well. Pretty much any actor that became a director pr...
I can't recomend a movie I've never sceen. All I did was spend a minute Googling the name of the movie and posting the best results. RJSchwarz San...