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well i dont plan on filming this yet, this is just for the screenwriting phase behind it. What could be done to it, what does the dialogue sound like ...

i meant the filming itself not to be great, its only friends acting for me, unpaid. i felt the script itself had a chance, and it does, but this is al...

What if i take out the useless VO but leave the ones where he describes what the friends mean to him? also what about adding the conflict of man vs. s...

This is the screenplay in part. I dont want to send the wole thing, i hope you all understand =) UNTITLED OFF TO WAR MOVIE By Justin Tierney OP...