I say if you want to direct it you shouldn't act in it then. My advice pick which ever one you like, to me it would be easier if you acted in it, that...
Maybe you should try adding better dialouge. Like what someone said, actually have them crack a joke. Keep on working on it and after a while it will ...
Don't worry about it, the script was scrapped anyways.
But if you enjoy writing, and you cannot but help and stop writing until it's the end, then a long draft is what comes. It's not how your going to sit...
Im proud because it's great. It was hard work and I put a lot of emotion in the script. And if I may say it's best to have your first draft long from ...
There's not the much to say about it, I think it was funny, but I wrote the script so of course I think it's funny. Let's see if the writer can do a b...