oops, the topic is supposed to be, watch a cop get SHOT. damn, the I and O are too close together.

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Got it for ya!

Not bad. Was it shot wider? The guys look squeezed.

I didn't follow the sudden change into night and thought the hallucination sequence after the shot went on too long.

I hope I'm not putting my foot in my mouth - but the ending made me laugh. Was it supposed to?

Yeah, it was intended to be funny. We are rather absurd people with a strange sense of humor. Honestly, I just do the sound editting and my partner does the filming and video editting. I think it was shot in widescreen, not positive. When we filmed it, it was around 4:00PM and it got darker as we shot. However, we thought that it worked, almost symbolic. We have virtually no budget whatsoever, we just kinda wing it. I know there is plenty of room for improvement, but I think with a little polishing, we could be pretty good...(besides the acting)!

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yeah.....the only thing that kinda bugged me was how the sound was in and out.....sometimes it would be quiet and i'd have to turn up my sound and sometimes it would be really loud and i'd have to turn my sound down, just try to keep it on a simple plain that is basically all the same, but other than that pretty good job, real funny except the slow motion voice went on a little too long and i couldn't understand a word he was saying (hope i wasn't supposed to?) Good job and once you get a little bigger budget you should be pretty good!

Steve-O
Unknown Name Film Company