I liked it overall. The lighting looked good to me. It seemed to work well for the night setting.

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Great work with the lighting.
Might have been my computer by I'm not sure, some of the dialogue appeared out-of-sync and slightly muffled. Still, this is really good work.

It was good. I really liked the cinematography, but the rain felt very fake to me, and because of how short it was, I felt I spent too much time concentrating on how fake the rain was, and it robbed it of the emotion for me, since I didn't relate to the characters, I was too busy relating to the rain. However, I explored your site, and I have to say that your Demo Reel blew me away. It was pure and simple art, it was just so beautiful. I felt that what you guys had up their, and I'm basically referring to everything, was beautifully done, but the direction for the actors was always just a touch off in my opinion.
But, I loved it all.

"We all have the potential to be great. It is our inability to do so that makes us miserable." C.S.Lewis

The dialogue was cliche and the voices were muffled sounding. But it did LOOK great.

And what camera/cameras are you using?

Yeah great scene visually, just audio was a bit muffled. Try ADR (Additional Dialogue Recording) and dub the voices.

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Personally, I didn't even notice the audio was bad. That may have been because the visuals were so compelling, but just saying, didn't notice at all.

"We all have the potential to be great. It is our inability to do so that makes us miserable." C.S.Lewis