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(@ourkid)
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you should use my idea.

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Posted : 17/05/2005 6:14 pm
(@rjschwarz)
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The rewrite idea reminds me of a brilliant Taxi episode where crazy Jim was a straightlaced preppy fellow until he ate a pot brownie.

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Posted : 17/05/2005 8:16 pm
(@flammablecow)
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I cannot imagine this being funny.
Ourkid's suggestion could make the movie watchable.

 
Posted : 17/05/2005 8:53 pm
(@ourkid)
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with my idea, the film works on more levels.

before you were relying on JUST your dialogue to be funny in and of itself. if you use the 'preppy-upper-class' guy getting stoned route, it works on more levels.

for example, the predator story/mythology, etc... in and of itself might not be funny. but, if you have the stoner guy telling a straight-laced preppy the story, and the preppy starts finding it funny, it works on an additional level because it shows what pot does to a person...

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Posted : 19/05/2005 5:25 am
 Kris
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whats the climax?
do they get any pot?
whats the premise? do they get pot?

 
Posted : 15/06/2005 9:05 am
(@domesticatedmatt)
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Don't worry about it, the script was scrapped anyways.

 
Posted : 16/06/2005 4:21 pm
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