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(@svelter)
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Originally posted by srproductions

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Originally posted by Svelter

I have a screenplay that I'd be willing to sell you. I'm actually currently adapting it because the plot got a little out of hand. It's basically a psychological thriller set inside an underground bunker.

Interested?


I am definately interested. If you could, please send me a brief synopsis. What is the length? I guess I will only be interested in ones under 15 and over 75. Thanks!


It's basically a mystery/war film with elements of horror, thriller and black humour dropped in for good measure. I have a basic synopsis.

Eight soldiers are trapped underground when the bunker that they are taking cover in suffers a direct hit from enemy bombs and collapses underground. They soon begin to panic when they realize that the bunker contains no food and one of the soldiers in wounded and murdered in the middle of the night. However, the story is told in a non-linear way to this.

The film itself is really about the soldiers on trial by the Captain, who has lost his mind inside the bunker and tied all the men up and threatened to shoot them if one of them doesn't confess to the murder. As each one defends himself the story moves back to a scene before or after the collapse in a hope to find the real killer.

I reckon the film itself would end up about the length of an episode of the Simpsons. The problem is that I can't come up with the best ending for it so it's ever-changing. Post your thoughts.

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You can't keep 'em out, they're already in!

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You can't keep 'em out, they're already in!

 
Posted : 13/04/2007 10:24 am
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KILL HIM! ANd then have him kill more people... i like the intensity of someone going on a killing spree... have him kill everyone... and then all the viewers will be like "WTF?... i thought they were at the trial?"

GENIUS... or not.

-Ryan

"Sometimes nothin' can be a real cool hand" - Cool Hand Luke

-Ryan
"Sometimes nothin' can be a real cool hand" - Cool Hand Luke

 
Posted : 17/04/2007 4:22 pm
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