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(@rj-morrison)
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the movie is called "poncho". its gonna be a 20 minute or so short...

Summary:
A young adopted boy is treated unfairly and meanly by 2 of the bullies in his school. The boy named Pasco, who we believe is dyslexic and has trouble reading. He meets a young girl, Chloe, which shows him what friendship is about. Sadly, in the end, Pasco dies via Huntington?s disease. It?s a rare brain disease that slowly makes you incapable of living. Then and only then, does everyone really appreciate the joy that Pasco brought to him or her.

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Posted : 30/11/2004 6:58 pm
(@company)
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Sounds good. Good luck with writing the script.

 
Posted : 20/12/2004 12:33 pm
(@kryptonomicon)
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So it's a comedy? Just kidding!

Good luck with that bro.

Stay frosty,

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Posted : 09/01/2005 11:12 pm
(@soxfan)
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Interesting premise, RJ. My one concern is that this is a lot of information to convey in 20 minutes. That doesn't give a whole lot of time for either backstory or character growth.

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Posted : 10/01/2005 12:12 am
(@cheneyproductions)
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to do that right i think you will need to make it feature langth

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Posted : 14/01/2005 7:27 am
(@chris-tucker)
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It sounds good, it's alot for a short specially with these characters, and the situations that they are in. I feel that it's possible to do what you want. Feel free to keep me posted on your progress.

 
Posted : 17/01/2005 2:04 pm
(@white-tiger)
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It sounds realy good. You will need good actors, but I like it!

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Posted : 25/02/2005 5:15 pm
(@screenwriter2211)
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Yeah, sound like something I would watch. You need a good solid script and emotional characters. Also, try to let the story unfold a little more. It sounds too much like a situation.

 
Posted : 09/03/2005 7:17 pm
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