So I would like some feedback if you don't mind. I wrote this a while back, and it's about vampires and humans. A land with a town and woods, humans in the city and vampires in the forest. There is a constant conflict between the two until it erupts into war. A vampire, Evalee falls in love with an engaged human, Fredrick. He doesn't find out she's a vampire until after he falls in love. She even becomes pregnant and he refuses to have anything to do with her because of her lies. There is an organization that comes to the city called The Order (an anti non human group) and Fred joins them and gets married to his finace. The half human half vampire child is born. There is an oracle stating that she is the one who can stop the war because she is from both sides. Evalee and her child endure opression and discrimination. It ends with everyone but the child dead from the war. The ending is something I'd be willing to change. Any help or suggestions would be great! Thanks for your time all-Lissie