Hey everyone. This is my first screen play that I wrote. I revised it once and it seems a little cleaner to me (before it had a pretty lame ending).

Synopsis: This is a day in the life of Steve, who has a nasty girlfriend and a pretty boring life. (hopefully the boringness won't translate to the screen, hehe).

This is just a short film that I would really like to make. It's a little bit of a story about my life (not all parts but it's based on some of it).

Please tell me what you think if you are interested in reading it.

Email me at sambow87?gmail.com