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(@rjschwarz)
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I've recently completed a screenplay and would like some opinions if anyone is game.

Bloody Distraction*
Silence of the Lambs meets Lethal Weapon.

If you have any interest email me at rob_schwarz?excite.com and I'll send off a pdf.

RJSchwarz
San Diego, CA


*Taking title suggestions

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Posted : 13/09/2006 4:02 pm
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Do you mind sending me it? invisiblehen?aol.com

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Posted : 13/09/2006 5:32 pm
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Just sent you a copy. Its a low-budget horror/comedy designed with limited sets, cast, and sfx.

RJSchwarz
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Posted : 13/09/2006 5:46 pm
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I would like to look at it as well.

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Posted : 13/09/2006 8:25 pm
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send away....billsfan8886?yahoo.com

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Posted : 13/09/2006 8:44 pm
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i'll take a look at it...
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Posted : 14/09/2006 1:29 am
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I would be interested

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Posted : 19/09/2006 7:53 pm
(@rjschwarz)
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Question for the pros out there. Is it common to put the WGA number on a screenplay? The samples I've seen never have it and it seems like pretty much everyone would have at least that level of cover-your-butt.

Enquiring minds want to know.

RJSchwarz
San Diego, CA

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Posted : 19/09/2006 8:18 pm
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I'm not a pro, but...

when my co-writer and I finished our most recent script we registered with the WGA immediately and included the registration number on the title page next to the copyright, mostly because we were planning to send the script around and wanted people to know that we had no intention of getting ripped off.

What sort of example scripts have you seen? If the film itself is finished and registered as a copyright, it's no longer really necessary to be so careful about the script, and unless you renew in five years the WGA number expires anyway.

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Posted : 20/09/2006 5:52 pm
(@rjschwarz)
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By example scripts I mean primarily those on the web and that you can purchase which are beyond the point where the WGA numbers would be helpful.

I'll put the number on the next draft (put that $20 to good use). Can't hurt and it might help.

RJSchwarz
San Diego, CA

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Posted : 20/09/2006 6:37 pm
 Kess
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RJ,
Are you still loo0king for critiques of your script? You can send it to me at www.clkla?yahoo.com if you like.

 
Posted : 21/09/2006 3:36 am
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