I just create a short story. What do you people think of it? Can it be made a into a film? Please anyone give me some opinions. I appreciate very much.

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Sabrina is sitting in a fast-food restaurant writing a story. The story is about the protagonist who fell asleep while writing a story. The protagonist dreamed of herself being in her own story. She wants to go back to the reality, but she can??t find the way because she hasn??t finished her story. Sabrina falls asleep when she stops writing here.

Some time later, two friends come up and wake Sabrina. They ask her if she would like to go shopping with them. Three people are walking on the street. During the walk, the two friends disappear suddenly. Sabrina realizes that she has fallen into her story. She tries very hard to find the way back to reality.

After some trails, Sabrina arrives the restaurant where she had come out. However she sees that the notebook which she had dropped unintentionally is torn up piece by piece and cannot be put back. Sabrina is so depressed that she sits at the take putting her head down.

Two friends come up calling Sabrina and ask her why she sleeps in the restaurant. They also ask Sabrina if she would like to go shopping with them. Sabrina rises her head and sees her notebook is untouched on the table. She feels a relief, and then goes out with the friends. During the walk, the two friends disappear suddenly.