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Hi, A while ago I had this idea for a demon movie, and i started jotting ideas down for it, now I'm not much of a writer but I finished the script to the best of my ability, and now i have an offer to make, I dont want it anymore and I want to see if it can be made into a movie, so I'm gonna post the script here(it's kinda short), and anyone who wants it can have it for free,if anyone decides to make it, they can edit the script all they want, cause as i said earlier, i'm not that much of a writer) the only catch is, that if it gets made, all I want is to be credited. so here it is:

DEMON

DARK SCREEN.
We hear an old voice begin to talk.

VOICE
Everyone thinks they know what demons are, but in reality, they have no idea. Everyone thinks demons are confined to hell, but actually, they could get out and roam the earth anytime they want, however there is a catch, if they choose to do this they have to give up their "benefits" of being in an after world such as hell. You see, angels and demons alike have a power similar to immortality, but instead of not being able to die of old age, they can't die at all. If they choose to leave hell, they have to relinquish this special power, and sense they are demons they don't eat, they don't sleep, and they feed on human soul energy. What a coincidence that this very night happens to be the 7000th anniversary of when the great warrior LEON killed the escaped demon VEGA. VEGA was the first demon to take the risk of giving up his special powers to walk on earth; he would have succeeded if LEON the great had not stopped him. VEGA was the first, and VEGA will be the last, for tonight, is the night of the demon!

FADE IN. EXT. LEON'S HOUSE.
The camera gets a shot of the outside of LEON'S house, it is beside a main highway.

INT. LEON'S HOUSE.
The camera has entered the house of LEON and is going down a hall that leads to his room.

INT. LEON'S ROOM.
We can see now that LEON has just woken up and is sitting on the edge of his bed rubbing the right side of his face with his palm. He rises off the bed; he is already dressed in some everyday pants and shirt.

LEON (whispery)
Man?what a *ed up dream???.wonder who the hell VEGA is?

He gets up and walks toward and into the camera as the scene ends.
FADE OUT

FADE IN
EXT. OUTSIDE OF LAUNDROMAT BUILDING.
The camera is looking at an angle to where the door of the Laundromat is to the left of the screen. Out of nowhere a rather evil looking man dressed in heavy gothic clothing and with spiked up black hair appears out of nowhere, he is on his hands and knees breathing heavily through his mouth. His breathing goes to normal and he stands up, he looks around, with a straight evil-like face.

VEGA (softly)
This world is mine?
FADE OUT

FADE IN
EXT. OUTSIDE OF CARLOS'S HOUSE
The camera is looking at the front of CARLOS'S house when all of a sudden, a man in a ski mask comes running out with a bag in his hand. He runs to the left and goes behind the tree nearest to the door, looking about to see if anyone saw him, he turns to look in the direction of the door (the camera is focused close to only see his face and part of the tree he is behind), when he does a gun is put to the back of his head and we hear the man with the gun (who is dressed in casual clothing, nothing special) speak.

CARLOS(calmly)
Freeze.

ROBBER(scared)
Ok man, don't shoot me, I'll give it back ok?

CARLOS
And what the * did you take this time JOE?

JOE
Well this time I figured that I'd go for the gold necklace.

CARLOS takes the bag, grabs and throws JOE away from the tree.

CARLOS
Get the hell outta my neighborhood.

JOE just stands there.

JOE
Uh?..um??uh?

CARLOS shoots at JOE'S feet and makes him run for his life down the dirt road.
He walks into his house after saying one more thing

CARLOS
*ing idiot.

EXT. PARKING LOT OF LAUNDROMAT
Cut to the parking lot of the Laundromat and we see JOE rounding the corner that leads into the parking lot, he runs up to the wall of the Laundromat and leans on it panting from running.

JOE
Damn, I could've had that necklace too.

VEGA walks out of the Laundromat door and looks to the side, at JOE.
JOE notices that VEGA is wearing a valuable necklace. VEGA continues walking until he's in the center of the parking lot, JOE runs up behind him in an attempt to rob him, but VEGA turns around with lightning speed and delivers a hit with his palm into JOE'S chest, sending him to the ground.

VEGA
It's not nice to steal, I was going to leave you alone until you did that.

VEGA starts walking toward JOE slowly.

JOE
Damn, I just can't get away without being caught can I?

JOE notices that VEGA is walking toward him.

JOE
Hey man, can we talk about this?

VEGA picks JOE up by the shirt, he moves his hand back as if he's going to hit JOE.

JOE
Oh come on man! Don't do this! Please!

VEGA thrusts his arm at JOE'S abdomen area and JOE looks as though he's being shocked. VEGA drops JOE, who is having violent tremors, VEGA pulls his hand into the view of the camera and he has one of JOE'S organs in his hand. He throws it to the side. JOE is making choking sounds and shaking wildly, VEGA puts his hand on JOE'S throat and when he does, JOE'S back arcs as though he's being pulled upward by some unknown force by his spinal cord. VEGA removes his hand and walks into the Laundromat, JOE is not moving.
FADE OUT

FADE IN. EXT. OUTSIDE OF CARLOS'S HOUSE.
We see CARLOS walking out of his front door this time dressed in a army-looking suit. He sits on the steps and looks like he's waiting. After a few seconds, his attention shifts toward the dirt road leading to his house, a car approaches and parks in his drive way. BRAD, MARK, and STAN get out as CARLOS gets off the steps and walks over.

CARLOS
You guys are late. If we're gonna run a business here, you can't be late.

BRAD
Stop bitching, I got caught in traffic.

MARK
Yeah, this might not be a big city, but that festival is getting ready to happen next week and they are just now bringing in the stuff to prepare for it.

STAN
Damn festival.

CARLOS looks at STAN.

CARLOS
You damn everything STAN, and who is this?

CARLOS points at MARK.

BRAD
This is MARK, he's the new guy I told you about.

CARLOS
That's right, well MARK, welcome aboard.

MARK
Thanks, but I'm still a little confused at to what it is that we do.

BRAD
This city is very small, so it doesn't have that much of a police force, so that means big time criminals can come here and do business without getting caught, so our job is basically being a second police force.

STAN
Damn police force.

MARK looks at STAN.

MARK
Ooook. Well that's all that I wanted to know, so how do we know where to find the criminals? We can't listen to the police radio can we?

BRAD
Nope, we have this.

BRAD pulls out a 2-way-radio.

BRAD
It can listen to police signals, but that's not all, since the criminals around here communicate by 2-way-radios and walky talkies, we can hear them too.

MARK
Awesome. So we just wait until we hear something over the radio?

CARLOS
Hell no, we go around patrolling, and if we hear something, we respond.

MARK
Oh.

BRAD looks up at the sky then back down, cracking his knuckles.

BRAD
All right. It's time.

BRAD and STAN get in the car, STAN getting in the back, and BRAD getting in the passenger side.

CARLOS
Let's go, it's time for your first day on the job to start.

CARLOS gets in the driver's side and MARK, gets in the remaining seat. The car drives off down the road and on to the main highway.
FADE OUT

FADE IN. EXT. OUTSIDE OF LEON'S HOUSE.
We see LEON going out his front door, dressed more formally than he was earlier. he starts to walk toward the main highway.

LEON
Time for another shitty day of work as a Laundromat janitor.
FADEOUT

FADE IN. EXT. A STREET.
We see the car CARLOS and the others are in riding down a street.

INT. INSIDE THE CAR.

BRAD
Damn, not that much going on today is there?

CARLOS
Well, today is Monday, hardly anyone does anything on Mondays.

STAN
Damn Mondays.

CARLOS gives STAN a weird look in the rear view mirror. The 2-way-radio begins to pick up a signal.

BRAD
All of you shut up a minute, I'm getting something.

VOICE
All units we have a dead body reported in the Laundromat parking lot, I repeat we have a dead body in the parking lot.

BRAD turns the 2-way off and gives CARLOS a "let's do this" look.

CARLOS
Time to work boys!

The car heads in the direction of the Laundromat.

EXT. OUTSIDE OF LAUNDROMAT.
CARLOS pulls the car into the parking lot, MARK is the first one to get out and heads for the body, but CARLOS grabs his shoulder and pulls him back.

CARLOS
Are you crazy? We have to gear up first.

He points to STAN and BRAD who are getting guns out of the trunk, STAN gets a shotgun, and BRAD gets two hard fighting gloves that fit over his hands, CARLOS takes out his pistol from earlier.

MARK
So what do I get?

BRAD reaches in the trunk and pulls out a machete and hands it to him.

MARK
You guys get guns and I get this?

MARK looks at it weirdly.

BRAD
Hey I'm fighting with my fists, be glad you even get that.

MARK
Whatever.

STAN cocks his shotgun and walks over to the body of JOE, with the others cautiously following. CARLOS gets in front of them and looks at JOE'S body.

CARLOS
Damn, if I only would've taken him in this wouldn't have happened, who would pull out someone's organ and just leave them there?

BRAD
That's not exactly what I'm wondering, I wanna know "why" they did it.

VEGA
Well it's very simple really.

They all turn around looking and they spot VEGA on the roof of the Laundromat.

VEGA
Hi, name's Vega, You see boys, when the soul energy of a human is drained, their bodily functions such as heartbeat and breathing stops, so they die. Any more questions class? (softly)Hahaha

BRAD
Why you piece of shit, get down here so I can kick your ass!

VEGA'S facial expression goes from joking to serious.

CARLOS
You can't do that brad, we have to arrest him, and you know that.

VEGA walks toward the back end of the roof, disappearing from their view.

MARK
Well, it appears we got a loon on our hands guys.

BRAD
*ing coward.

VEGA
I accept the challenge.

They all turn around and see VEGA standing behind him, STAN'S eyes widen in a funny manner, CARLOS and MARK have a half terrified half confused expression, BRAD looks at VEGA threateningly, he bangs his fists together and walks toward VEGA.

BRAD
You accept huh? Well let's go!

BRAD runs at VEGA(who is standing perfectly still and looking calm). When he is about to reach VEGA, VEGA sidesteps, raises his hand(his hand is in a chopping form with all fingers straight), and when BRAD runs past him, VEGA violently karate chops BRAD in the back of the knee cap, BRAD goes down to his knees. He gets up quickly, but with a stagger because of his knee. He looks angrily at VEGA.

BRAD
That was cheap you little shit.

VEGA
Cheap? If anything it was the smartest thing to do in a fight, I have now disabled you.

BRAD
Disabled? Yeah right.

BRAD goes for another charge at VEGA, he manages to get a little more speed and hit VEGA with a 4-hit combo: two in the stomach, one in the face, and the last was a double fist shove. VEGA goes back, his face turned away from BRAD.
He slowly turns his head back, looking at BRAD. BRAD goes for the last charge to finish VEGA, but VEGA grabs BRAD'S arm, and knees him in the stomach hard, then while BRAD is holding himself in pain, VEGA puts his hand to BRAD'S throat, and as with JOE, drains his soul energy. When he gets through with BRAD, he looks to where the others were standing, and they are no where in sight. VEGA is looking around and when he looks at the Laundromat, his head stops looking around.

VEGA(creepy)
I see you?

VEGA walks in the direction of the Laundromat.

He enters the Laundromat and looks around, STAN comes out from behind one of the washing machines, holding his shot gun. He cocks it.

VEGA
Well, well, well, we have a hero on ours hands do we?

STAN
????????

VEGA
Well I'm a mo-ther fu-cking demon, comprende Punta?

STAN
Damn demons

STAN points his gun at VEGA and shoots him 3 times, after the 3rd shot, VEGA is on the floor. STAN squats to look at the demon on the floor, all of a sudden, VEGA opens his eyes and throws STAN across the room, and STAN droops his gun while in the air.

VEGA
Damn humans.

Out of no where a machete goes through VEGA'S abdominal area, blood squirting out, the camera retracts and we see that MARK stabbed VEGA. VEGA looks down at the blade in disgust and does a backward kick knocking MARK away. He takes out the blade, while making a few grunts of pain, and throws it aside. He walks over to where he threw STAN. MARK sits up and goes behind a row of washers where he came from, CARLOS is also there.

CARLOS
So what happened?

MARK
Well let's just say this ain't no human we're dealing with.

CARLOS
What?

VEGA
He said-

They look up to see VEGA looming over them, with STAN'S shotgun in hand.

VEGA
This ain't no human you're dealing with.

He points the shotgun at them, they get up an run just in time to escape the shot. They are now in front of the door, CARLOS takes out his pistol and aims at VEGA, VEGA?S gun is aimed at CARLOS.

CARLOS
And I thought you were too stupid to use a weapon.

VEGA
Your time is up, I'm through toying with you stupid-ass people.

(slow motion) he cocks the gun and VEGA and CARLOS both shoot, CARLOS'S shot hits VEGA, and just before the shot from VEGA hits CARLOS, MARK gets in front of him and takes the shot that was meant for CARLOS, MARK falls to the ground as CARLOS looks in horror(end slow motion). VEGA looks at his shoulder, which is bleeding black blood.

VEGA
You actually made me bleed?now it's personal!

(slow motion)He aims the gun at CARLOS, but just as he is about to fire, we see the machete hit his shoulder from behind, VEGA staggers rapidly, looking at his shoulder region that got hit, his arm is gone. He walks rapidly behind a washer row and it appears that he falls, black fluid is all over the floor, it leaves a trail to where VEGA went. Cut to STAN who was behind him with the blade.

CARLOS
Stan! Thank god.

STAN
Damn go- never mind, I might actually regret damning him.

CARLOS
Hahaha, let's get the * out of here.

VEGA
Let's not!

VEGA gets up from behind the washer row, arm still gone.

VEGA
I got a trick to show you guys?

CARLOS drops his pistol and smiles go to terror as they stare at him, his missing arm area is moving, black liquid flowing out. He yells a little and his arm is back, he moves it around a little.

CARLOS and STAN are staring mouths a gape, they look at each other, then back to VEGA.

CARLOS
Shit.

STAN
Damn that.

VEGA starts to walk toward them, and they back up slowly, when VEGA gets to where the body of MARK is, he stops for a second and drains his soul energy, then keeps moving. VEGA is in front of the door of the building, they are a few feet in front of him.

VEGA
It all ends here boys and girls! hahahahaha!

Just as he says this the door goes flying open hard and hits VEGA , knocking him out cold. The camera turns to CARLOS and STAN, who are confused at this point, they peek out the door only to see LEON standing there, in a fighting stance with a broom in hand.

Carlos(to LEON)
Go now!

CARLOS and STAN run out of the Laundromat past LEON, who is still standing there looking at the knocked out VEGA.

EXT. OUTSIDE LAUNDROMAT.

LEON
What the hell is going on and who are you guys?!

CARLOS and STAN stop.

CARLOS
Don't worry about that you twit, now come on!

LEON
But this guy needs an ambulance, we just can't leave him.

CARLOS grabs LEON by the arm and pulls him away.

CARLOS
trust me, the last thing he needs is an ambulance.

LEON
hey what are you doing let me go!

At this point the knocked out VEGA gets up and looks toward them. He looks at LEON very greedily

VEGA
finally..I've found you...

He starts to walk at them with a quick pace. when he gets about 5 feet from LEON, CARLOS, and STAN who are frozen in their spots, he stops.

LEON
who are you?

CARLOS
I think the question you're looking for is: what is he?

VEGA
I've waited so long for this Leon, and now here I am.

He tilts his head back and laughs.

VEGA
hahahahha!

just as VEGA does this, CARLOS elbows him in the gut and kicks him to the ground.

CARLOS (to LEON)
let's go! now!

LEON
alright already, but you've got some *ing explaining to do!

CARLOS, LEON, and STAN run up to the car that CARLOS and his friends were in earlier.

CARLOS goes to the driver's side and opens the door.

CARLOS
alright you two get in and let's go.

LEON gets in but STAN remains outside of the vehicle, staring towards VEGA, who has just begun to get up after CARLOS'S attack.

STAN
no, I got a job to do, you guys go, and I'll distract him.

CARLOS
don't be *ing crazy Stan, he'll kill you.

STAN(while nodding)
damn that. you have to get him out of here carols!!! go now!!! get the * out!!!

CARLOS looks at STAN with surprise, then salutes him and drives off.

STAN approaches the now standing VEGA.

VEGA
so boy, you came back for round two huh?

STAN gets in a fighting stance with his machete.

VEGA
you humans never learn do you?

VEGA looks up at the sky and he points his hands up to the sky as if he's reaching for the sky. He starts to laugh evilly and looks back at STAN with black glowing eyes. He points his palm at STAN'S machete and makes a sideways motion with his arm(like someone with psychic powers would if they were throwing something with their mind), the machete flies out of STAN'S hand and goes in the direction that VEGA made the arm motion in.

STAN looks at VEGA menacingly and charges at him.

VEGA makes a pushing movement with both his arms, and STAN goes flying backwards.

VEGA
I'm tiring of this bullshit...

VEGA picks up Stan and throws him(physically, no powers).

VEGA
I'm tired of you stupid damn humans...

VEGA throws STAN once more, he looks as if he's about to faint now because of exhaustion. but this time, when STAN lands, he notices that the machete is about a foot away from him.

VEGA
and most of all, I'M TIRING OF *ING AROUND WITH YOU!!!! NOW DIE!!!!!

VEGA goes to grab STAN, but STAN grabs VEGA'S arm with one hands and grabs the machete with the other.

STAN
DAMN THAT!!!!!

STAN pulls on VEGA'S arm and holds the machete out, the force of STAN'S pull makes VEGA fall down on the machete, impaling his abdomen.

VEGA
AHHH!!!!! YOU WON'T GET OFF THAT EASILY THIS TIME!!!!

VEGA thrusts his arm straight through STAN'S head, causing him to let go of the machete that is in VEGA'S abdomen. VEGA stands up and looks at the dead STAN. he takes out the machete from his abdomen and puts his hand to STAN'S throat, taking his soul energy. VEGA turns around and is facing the camera, we see that his wound from the blade is gone, he walks off in the direction of the camera.

INT. INSIDE CARLOS'S CAR.
CARLOS is seen at the wheel and is driving down a deserted street.

LEON
so he's a demon?

CARLOS
yeah, and he killed all my partners, Stan?s probably gone by now too, my they all rest in peace.

LEON
so how does he know my name?

CARLOS
I don't know, maybe you two know each other from somewhere, his name is VEGA.

LEON looks at CARLOS with a confused look on his face.

LEON
that's weird, I have this reoccurring dream about me killing this evil guy named Vega.

CARLOS has gotten to his drive-way and parks in front of his house.

CARLOS
wait, wait, wait, what?

they both get out of the car and walk in front it.

LEON
yeah it's weird that I didn't think about it earlier, guess I has being hit with all this so quickly, I didn't even consider that they were the same people.

VEGA
well actually, the story is a little deeper than that, why don't you let me tell it huh Leon?

LEON and CARLOS both turn and see VEGA standing there.

VEGA
it's a really long story but, the short version is that you are the ancestor of a warrior that killed me 7000 years ago, and now, since he's dead, I guess I'll have to take my revenge out on you.

CARLOS
you're not gonna do shit you *er!

CARLOS runs at VEGA and attempts to tackle him, but VEGA grabs and knees him, then picks him up over his head, and slams him down to the ground. CARLOS does not move.

VEGA
so much for him, now for you...

LEON
your not gonna get to do nothing to me you *ing freak. If my ancestor killed you, then I sure as hell can.

VEGA
HA! your ancestor had a huge buster sword and help from a wizard, you're all alone now bucko.

LEON looks around and spots a metal pipe on the ground, he picks it up and gets into a fighting stance. VEGA looks at him dumbfounded.

VEGA
you're kidding right? a metal pole?

LEON
well it might not be a buster sword, but I can kick your ass with it all the same.

VEGA
alright then, we'll play it your way.

VEGA spots another metal pole on the ground, he picks it up and charges at LEON.
VEGA swings at LEON'S head but LEON blocks with his pole, VEGA makes a series of fast quick swings and LEON, but is unsuccessful, LEON in turn attempts to hit VEGA, but is also unsuccessful. VEGA then tries a series of double handed hard swings, LEON has a little trouble blocking these, VEGA then does a fake out, aiming at LEON'S head, but then reverses it to hit his feet, LEON goes down and drops his pole. VEGA throws his pole away.

VEGA
so you see you little twit, I am greater than you, and you can't do A DAMN THING ABOUT!

LEON
hahahahahahaha.(softly)

VEGA
oh, now your going nuts as well?

LEON
no, I just saw something funny.

VEGA
wanna share it with me before you die?

LEON
I don?t have to, it's coming right at you.

(slow motion) VEGA turns around only to catch a quick glimpse of CARLOS right before he hits VEGA in the face with a pick-axe, blood is splattered everywhere, and VEGA hits the ground hard. CARLOS limps over to LEON, who stands up now.

LEON
thanks man.

CARLOS
no problem, I guess this time he slipped up huh?

LEON
what do you mean?

CARLOS
well usually he drains your soul energy when you're weak enough, but he didn't this time. guess I got lucky. come on, you can come in my house and get cleaned up.

LEON
alright.

they both go to go inside CARLOS'S house, LEON gets to the top of the steps of CARLOS'S front porch, but CARLOS turns around.

CARLOS
wait a minute, I forgot something in the car, I'll be right back.

(slow motion) as CARLOS makes his way back to his car, LEON notices that VEGA'S body is not there, he yells for CARLOS to stop, but it is too late, VEGA had already came up behind him and thrown him across the yard somewhere. VEGA then stares at LEON furiously, half his face is torn and revealing VEGA'S demon side.

VEGA
alone at last Leon, now it's time for some pain boy!!!!

LEON
oh shit!

(slow motion) as VEGA runs at LEON, who is on the top step of CARLOS'S porch(which is about 5 feet up), CARLOS runs out from no where, with both the metal poles in hand, he throws one to LEON, LEON catches it. at this point, VEGA is a couple feet from LEON, CARLOS is a couple feet behind VEGA. VEGA jumps into the air to get up to the top step where LEON is, as he does this, CARLOS springs from behind VEGA(holding the pole out, like a lancing motion), and LEON jumps off the top step holding his pole in a lancing motion also. CARLOS and LEON both hit VEGA at the same time with the poles, VEGA has got CARLOS'S pole going through his back and coming out of his stomach, and LEON'S poles going through his stomach and coming out of his back. CARLOS and LEON stand there watching the demon stagger in pain.

VEGA
AHH!!!!!! DAMMIT!!! I WAS SO *ING CLOSE!!!

VEGA goes to his knees with the poles still through him. he looks at LEON with a look of pure hatred.

VEGA
I will come back one day LEON, and I will prevail.

VEGA falls to the ground flat on his stomach, his whole body disintegrates until nothing is left but the poles in the ground.

LEON
It's over, he's gone.

LEON gets up off his feet(when him and CARLOS landing, they stabbed VEGA with the poles and fell down from exhaustion)

CARLOS
what if he comes back?

CARLOS gets up also.

LEON
He won't, he was killed by a person with the same blood that killed him the first time, therefore he won't be coming back.

CARLOS
how do you know all this?

LEON turns to face CARLOS, with a light smile on his face.

LEON
I was telling the truth when I said that I have dreams about this every night.

CARLOS
oh. your welcome to come in and clean up in you want by the way.

CARLOS goes up his steps.

LEON
no thanks, I think I'll go for a walk.

CARLOS
suit yourself.

LEON turns and walks way, but something peculiar happens, as he is walking away, he starts to slowing go transparent, until finally he is gone. CARLOS'S jaw drops at the sight of this. he looks up at the sky, as he does, angelic godly music starts to play, and the screen fades slowly until it is black.

(words appear on the screen when it goes to black)

After Vega came back from earth for the
second time, a law was passed in
hell that no demon could ever
could ever walk the earth freely again.

The words disappear after a few seconds and the credits roll.

 
Posted : 26/05/2005 2:50 pm
(@delorean)
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Did you take the names Leon and Carlos from Resident Evil II??

 
Posted : 26/05/2005 7:02 pm
(@sharp-eye)
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well carlos is from part 3(of the game at least), but no, I was just thinking of random names.

 
Posted : 26/05/2005 8:26 pm
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so does anyone think they can make it into a movie?

 
Posted : 28/05/2005 2:29 am
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