Don't know if this is the right forum.
I am making a comedy called 101 Thing to do in the Middle of the Ocean. I am still making the beginning of the short but I thought I'd make a poster for it.
Tell me what you think.
H.A.
It looks nice, but your fonts aren't quite working. The word "do" is disappearing into the shadow on the plane. You might want to try repositioning the words, adjusting the size, making the font 3D, etc. Also the "coming soon" font is a little too thin in places. These things just make it seem a little awkward to me. But I do like the "101" font and the airplane, especially the work you did with it disappearing into the clouds.
Don't judge me by my age, only by my talent.
Don't judge me by my age, only by my talent.
Shrimphead took the words from my mouth. I agree with him.
"We all have the potential to be great. It is our inability to do so that makes us miserable." C.S.Lewis
"We all have the potential to be great. It is our inability to do so that makes us miserable." C.S.Lewis
Thx for the comments.
You probally can't see it but all the letters are actually 3D, it's just becausee I turned them black it made it look like 2D. Ill fix up the words and see what I can do to make it look better.
H.A.
