Some dodgey framing of shots, but overall, It has the feel of a dedicated TV show called, "Zach Attacks". I would reckon, your work will go down well on TV. In fact, you appear to have a kind a "Jackass" thing goin on. Stay with the comedy, because I can see a really dedicated TV sketch show vibe happenin with you. Hand held shots, quick editing and daft acting with a central theme. Its all in there. Well done. I'll post a link later to some stuff thats been done in Ireland. I think the age range and direction is similar.

But be warned, the Irish stuff is a lot ruder and my comparisons may be off.

hahaha ok

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im only make these short films wen ppl dont show up for shooting that we need, so if these are ok, im on the right track.

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I though it was really great. The audio wasn't the greatest, but if you did just a little post-production, it would improve the audio quality enougth that people would forgive you for it, since it's a run and gun handheld comedy kinda thing. It's inexcusable not to, since you can do so cheaply. Also, with a little attention to lighting your shots would improve quality wise greatly. I know this adds to the shooting time, but when well lit your shots looked great, like when the attackee was against the wall in the garage in zach 2, versus some of the other shots were blurry and ill-defined. But overall, really funny!

"We all have the potential to be great. It is our inability to do so that makes us miserable." C.S.Lewis

thanks, im working on improving both sound and lighting quality when i get some moneyyyy =)

i use magix movie edit pro 12, and im not really sure how the audio cleanser works, alothough ive tried numerous times..

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