1) Was there a script? I only ask because a lot of it seems like it was made up on the spot. This style of comedy is alright, but I think you over use it. It's one of those styles that people go, "Alright, that's enough, on with the story!".

2) Characters? The characters don't seem flushed out at all. The gimmick with all three die out really fast. The one guy yelling was the worst. The other two wren't bad but they could be better.

3) Why do the two women stay the night? I thought they were only there to use the phone or something? How come they eat with these creeps?

4) Continuity was by far the biggest problem. That laptop is seen in almost every scene. Wait a minute... when was the laptop even introduced? I'm only asking because it's visible in a lot of scenes.

5) The lighting was alright. That's probably one of the best things about this video.

6) I like the music. The sound through out the whole video was good. One problem was that I could hear the tripod. Were you using the built in microphone or something else?

7) The acting was bad. There were a few moments that made me laugh but it seems like your actors need more time in front of a camera.

8) Editing wasn't very good but niether was the camera work. There were just too many jumps from here to there. Did you have a storyboard? Storyboards will help a lot in deciding what shots you'll need and how your movie will look. I suggest next time to draw up a storyboard(even if its stick figures)and see if it helps at all.

Overall I thought it was alright for a beggining video. It's one of those movies that will teach you: What you did right? And what you did wrong? Sometimes those are the best videos. How else can one become better at making movies? Good Job!

I didn't laugh once. This is a mockery to filmmaking.

"Metal never dies it only hides"- Aaron

Thanks for the long review!
Yeah if you haven't noticed we aren't a multi million dollar production company. Actually we don't even get paid, we're all 15-16 anyways but I hear ya.
The tripod you could hear, the editing wasn't the best. I was the screaming guy in the pink robe (if that's what you mean by the screaming guy) and yes we did make it up on the spot and exactamundo! we said "alright lets film" and filmed it. We didn't introduce the labtop because it's not necessary. If we would of explained everything it would of been an hour long movie! the female actors didn't want to act, we didn't write a script/storyboard and we had alot of fun making it.
I guess it's just one of those films where you have to know us to understand the humor, actually this is the worst kind of humor (screaming, random) but we did it.
I really appreciate that review I'll remember it the next time I'm editing/writing.
-Brandon S. Rob.

B&C Productions, bring America Joy since 2001.

Yeah

B&C Productions, bring America Joy since 2001.

Would you like to here the only quote I have ever heard which can accurately describe what I felt while whatching this?

"Don't look at me, look at your heart...on the floor..."

Everything else has been said.

That's it! You people have stood in my way long enough! I'm going to clown college!