Hi, I'm a student filmmaker and I would greatly appreciate any comments I could get on my short film Journal.
?url? http://web.ics.purdue.edu/?adonkle/index.htm?/url?
Two notes, The audio was done in camera (working on buying a shotgun currently) and the cinematography wasn't really considered too much because I was thinking it wouldn't make a difference (I have since learned better)
Thanks for any opinions!
Alex
It reminded me of a Stephen King story I read years ago called something like 'The Word-Processor of the Gods'.
Technically, yeah, the biggest thing I noticed was the background noise on the soundtrack, a new mike will definitely help :). Otherwise it seemed OK for a student film.
I saw your website..
But I can't see the trailer of your work
So I don't have any oponions right now
Nada Taufik
Film Maker
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Nada Taufik
Film Maker
pink_rebels?filmsindie.com
http://www.filmsindie.com/pinkrebels
