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(@iggy35)
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I just put my new film up on Youtube.
I'd like some constructive critisism.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gKBpT1iRvdY
Please be gentle ?:D?

IGGY35

 
Posted : 29/03/2007 11:55 am
(@tarver_lance)
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I thought the whole idea was very clever. It reminds me of a commercial. I just wish there was more to it! Personally, I found that the music didn't fit with the scene at all. That's just my opinion anyway. It was shot and edited together perfectly. The premise is easy to understand and the story is easy to follow. One problem is that it starts off to quickly. I feel like I'm already half way into the project when I push play. But other than the music choice(which is nothing big)and the beggining, this skit is AMAZING! Good Job!

 
Posted : 29/03/2007 10:35 pm
(@markg)
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Yeah, it's a decent short short. Maybe you should enter it into some of the < 1 minute film festivals.

 
Posted : 29/03/2007 10:39 pm
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