I'm sure the folks back home will love this. It seemed so specifically personal that I didn't relate to it. But you did a fine job shooting landmarks and scenery. I'm a big fan of black and white so I liked that choice.

Something to think about: the folks back home are usually more interested in you than in buildings and sights. Even if you have to prop the camera up on a bench and walk around, it will become more personal.

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Honestly I couldn't relate all that much to it either because as C.I. said it felt very personal. That being said it was well shot and nicely put together.

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just want something that is not boring for the folks back home and I honestly have no clue how I did...

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You suceeded. Well done.

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Originally posted by JDub

Hello,

I am traveling the world for 2-3 years and I am making little movies for my friends and family back home. I just finished my first one and would like some feedback. I am not trying to make life-shattering works here, I just want something that is not boring for the folks back home and I honestly have no clue how I did...

?url? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cvPsZtDcuPw?/url?

Thanks!!!

JW

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Great job, I actually did relate a little to it. Reminds me when I left the US (currently in Panama). I liked the shots a lot. Keep up the good work.