Lookin for advice on how to get my ideas onto paper. The concept for the movie doesn't sport much dialogue until the halfway point. (ie, like Les Samorai) I'm having trouble organizing the visual shot angles since thats the "dialogue" of this film. Looking to tell the story through cuts and atmosphere. Its not a silent film, but merely, the long delay of dialogue is to set up a mystical "teaser" i guess before indulging into a wordy plot. For instance the first scene is of two men in a room. One is towering over the other yelling something. The yelling is mumbled or echo'd. The camera twists into a face off of edits showing the growing intesity of the situation (ill explain this more if anyones interested but its to long for now.) At the end of this a close-up of the yelling mans mouth shows him say "and...thats it"..fades or blurs into black as music starts to be heard. THEN, a gunshot, by this time its just the sound and you can't see who or why.
Don't want to give away to much but i thought that might explain why im having such a hard time organizing this. Any advice is helpful; thanks man.

it runs and runs to catch up with the pot of gold, but at the end of the day..its just cornflakes