Hey everyone! im pretty new here so bare with me.

Im writing a short experimental film and was wondering whether any of you lot would give me some feedback/ideas.

Heres the synopsis..

This film is a day in the life of a confused mind.
we follow a young man on a journey to find himself to find what he thinks hes lost.on the way he encounters paranoia, isolation and obsession.

thats basically my rough translation from my head. itll do for now.

basically its about a pot head thinking hes lost his mind and going on a "trip" to find it. i dont want to visually show him using drugs but i am going to include a few giveaways just to show its the marijuana thats messing his mind up.

i must also stress that this film only has one character in it, and thats the boy.

i need a twist....help??

this is bearing in mind an experimental not just a boring drama, hopefully with some quite nice shots and good music.

this is just a rough spagetti of ideas so if anyone can understand this then it would be so cool if you could help me out

cheers

betch