It was pretty good. The twist at the end was perfect. I dont know if the clicky noises were on purpose but they kinda distracted me from watching.....they were pretty annoying. Good acting.

pretty good but i agree with the clicky noise

Same again, get rid of the noise. Other wise fair play to ya. Good work. Cleary

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Do you know what caused that terrible audio problem? And is there a reason you didn't fix it before you posted this movie?

One thing that most beginning filmmakers do that really annoys me is long credits at the start. I used to do it, too so I know exactly why we do it. But no one other than the cast and crew care. You can credit everyone at the end so you don't need to start your 2.5 minute movie with 35 seconds of beginning credits and then repeat the credits at the end. A full 23% of your movie is opening credits - I like it better when there is a title and then jumps right in.

You could have also used a little lighting. The shot in the office could have used a simple light on Sid. Not a lot - just a bounce board would have given the shot a more professional look.

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Originally posted by gdtree16

It was pretty good. The twist at the end was perfect. I dont know if the clicky noises were on purpose but they kinda distracted me from watching.....they were pretty annoying. Good acting.

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Ditto-- I could not watch it because of the clicking noises. Go buy Sony ACID Pro and make some soundtrack that works, or uses silence, or get a track off twistedtracks.com Just my 3 cents worth of feedback. Good acting though.

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