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moonmin troll

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Ok...so its filmed using a mobile phone, but thats all i have right now. Im very happy with the sound however so please play load and watch full screen!

Comments are most welcome.

Thanks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YIqOEelFddk

Posted : 29/08/2007 1:16 pm

Henry701

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? ? ? ? ?

H.A.

Posted : 29/08/2007 1:44 pm

rjschwarz

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The sound was effective as was the camerawork. I guess cell phone cameras are right for YouTube. The conclusion left me wondering what was the point. There were no characters, no story, no narrative at all.

RJSchwarz
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RJSchwarz

Posted : 29/08/2007 3:26 pm

moonmin troll

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Thank you for your comments rjschwarz.

I am trying to focus more on creating an atmosphere for now however there is a narrative....sort of!

Cant wait to get a real camera!

Posted : 29/08/2007 5:09 pm

hethwheel

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I got it.

It was very simple and effective. Not bad for a mobile job. Once you read the title of the piece, the rest fits into place. The narrative was told through the shots.

Posted : 30/08/2007 12:02 am