Hey guys, we just finished our first 30 min short film, and we are selling it to our classmates in september. we were just wanting some fedback on the two trailers. the basic idea is we saw a lame bully movie and we spoofed it. let us know.
Teaser -
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ONvMF_-N-ms
Trailer -
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XFz1MifeIiA
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Looks really hilarious.
The the trailer and the teaser were both to long for me (but I stilled watched them). Your could work on your cinematography, but looks good. The "bullies" looked a little... well, weak I guess but that is not a big factor at all.
I'd watch this movie, so the trailer did the job.
I love the scene with the girl's room and then the guy sleeping in it is revealed, really funny.
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thank you very much henry this exactly what i like-constructive critisim. i will work on the other stuff 😕
Anyone else?
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What is the story? Give us some info on the film...by watching the trailer and teaser it was not clear. Richard looks big enough to take them down if he so chooses. Go Richard!
haha well it deals with Richard moving to his new house, being homeschooled all his life and then being thrust into the public school system. it is not ment to be mean in any way, as i am only spoofing the cheesy bully movies, and not making fun of people who are actually bullied. The Main characters are-
Richard, who is so ludicrisly lame he puts other nerds to shame,
Clark, the typical "backwards cap" bully and his two henchmen, Vito and Phillip,
Mr. Westmont, Richard's dad who wants nothing more than to have Richard be a star athelete,
and Kareena, Richard's semi-odd emo sister.
I wrote the original version in 8th grade, then re-edited it for content(taking out juvinile jokes etc.), and shortened it.
Beacuse many of my actors have trouble showing up, we decided to film it all in one day, we had tried 2 previous times to film on a scheduale, both failing.
Thanks for your interest 😕
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