Story was a little hard to follow, and if i hadn't read the plot synopsis on here i wouldn't have known what was going on. The backing music drowned out a lot of the speech. Some of the cuts showed promise, but the framing of the presenter made him look very small :p There wasn't that much of a conclusion to it, as an educational short you expected some sort of synopsis towards the end.

Apart from that, nice, some good camera work.

thanks yes i totally agree it didn't go as planned

john2006mad

Visit my first amateur movie:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7U8q5PucXc0

So what did you learn, John?

Lots & Lots:

• Not to rush these projects
• Take a step back and try to imagine it as if i didn't already know what was going to happen
• Plan more carefully
• Be more strcit on actors to stop them laughing ?:D?
• Go with the flow more and learn to adapt to certain surrounding etc
• Ive also learnt how to incorporate basic effects to a good use (Black and white)

john2006mad

Visit my first amateur movie:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7U8q5PucXc0

That's exactly what I learned from my first film. And my next one was better. I look forward to seeing your next one.

thanks

john2006mad

Visit my first amateur movie:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7U8q5PucXc0