Hey guys, just a quick post to see what you guys think of this short scene I through together for a rough draft. The audio needs to be worked and Im awaiting an instrumental produced specifically for it. But id like some positive critercism and your genral opinion of what Ive got so far.

Once Im happy with it I intend to use it to get sponsorship to help out with the production costs. Thanks guys: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bErJbE1Xeww&hd=1

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