Hey filmmaking.net, so me an my friends have been working with adobe after effects and pinnacle studio. And well we ended up with this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Db_MzLKuYFA

It's rough, we know. No need to remark on that. However what would be welcome are tips and ideas, we're most definitely new to film-making, and our acting is pretty down in the dumps. However we would love to improve, so watch and give us some responses. Negative or Positive.