Hello everyone, I wanted to announce a new (very) short film. Feel free to take a look...hopefully someone will find it amusing.
Lunch Chat (3:16)
Julie, desperately overworked and underpaid, has some probing questions for her contact in HR.
http://www.ifilm.com/ifilmdetail/2761279
Any comments or constructive criticism is very appreciated. Thanks for taking a look--
Brian
http://www.whitesheepproductions.com
http://www.whitesheepproductions.com
Didnt really like the dialogue or acting although i thought from a technical perspective (lighting,editing,angles) it was really good.
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Originally posted by stevesie
Didnt really like the dialogue or acting although i thought from a technical perspective (lighting,editing,angles) it was really good.
Hey, thanks for the feedback. This is definitely a first attempt on all parts--directing, acting, writing, editing. Total learning experience, we were mostly aiming for it just to be watchable.
Thanks for the feedback.
On a side note, I was looking at your other threads and saw you talking about lighting a card game in garage. I'm going to be doing the exact same setup in a few months, planning on just using a couple of worklights, one always above, then moving the other one per setup. Let me know if you figure out anything better...
thanks,
Brian
http://www.whitesheepproductions.com
http://www.whitesheepproductions.com
Yeah with the lighting for the card scene, i just had a few practicals already above and then just had 2 halogens (one behind the camera and one off to the side to reduce shadows) worked well, although i have created most of the look of it post production.
