hahaha I loved the free self defense class line, classic. Great way to break up the serious tone, overall an entertaining short. Glad I watched it, well executed. Great Genre to work with.

Here is some of my thoughts:
1) Be careful of the flares and reflections from the car, I saw some "hot spots" and I saw a reflect of the camera man against the red car.
2) The project was well executed but if you want to recognition, it needs to be more dramatic in some form (it could be shot crazy, it can be gory or ironic-- which would have best fit).

Overall though, it was good. I am just nit-picking at this point plus I want you to reach the next stage.

BTW - could I get your input on the following commercials I did?
http://www.crashthesuperbowl.com/#/gallery/video/1518/

http://www.crashthesuperbowl.com/#/gallery/video/1759/

http://www.crashthesuperbowl.com/#/gallery/video/1916/

Nothing fancy, just honesty.