Greetings and Salutations,
I'm completely new here, and I must say, this is a fantastic website. I'd love to hear any/all feedback on the film I just finished, "Revenant". Kudos are welcome, of course, but I value constructive criticism with the goal of improvement in mind.
Thanks in advance!
- Brian
ps. It's in two parts only due to Youtube's restrictions.
Part one:
?url? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oiPxYnK2LmA?/url?
Part two:
?url? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L91wbTlI7gE?/url?
Henry 'Dood' It Productions
I felt the film was too staged--both in the performances and the setup. You need to boost your lighting, and utilize subtle gels. Also, the camera should have sat on a tripod more often, it's a bit shakey.
Good start.
Michael Reed
www.bigtalent.com/michaelreed
www.pentaworks.org
Michael Reed
www.myspace.com/m1chaelreed
www.pentaworks.org
