Hey Alfrits, good job! It takes alot of time and effort to make any project happen. It is far more difficult to make a film than critique it, so I give you credit in advance for that.
Music was pretty cool, did you make that yourself?

Some things I noticed:

1) There is pan scene in the first half of the film, right after the guy knocks on the door. Basically the pan appears to stop or is not consistent when panning left. Plus you cut back to the scene while panning, so it seems sort of elementary in that light.

2) The security guard exchange - you violated the rule of 180. I know it's experimental but I lost my place of the scene as the result.

3) There is part in the biking scene where the biker appears to be traveling fast with the pedaling and it comes to a shot of him cruising.

4) Lighting - The Black & White looked very cool for most of the part. Just be careful as some shots got lost, I don't know if it's a youtube but one example is when he's biking and the security guard exchange. (Also becareful of light flares on the lens - unless that is your intention)

5) Build up the attack scene a little more. It seemed like you did not shoot the footage you wanted and to fill out the "surprise somehow."

Good job overall, I did not discuss content just wanted to point out the technicalities if anything. Hope this help and I don't want you thinking I am being negative to be negative. =P

BTW - What do you think of some commercial I helped produce/direct/write...
http://www.crashthesuperbowl.com/#/gallery/video/1518/

http://www.crashthesuperbowl.com/#/gallery/video/1759/

http://www.crashthesuperbowl.com/#/gallery/video/1916/

Nothing fancy, just honesty.

Wow thanks for the feedback 🙂 Sory it takes a long time for me to reply, its because i have to shot another project and it take a lot of my time.

Thanks for the critique, i really appreciate it. Actually i make that film back at 2003, when i first attend my film school.

I will see ur commercial, here in my country the internet connection is very poor, so to watch streaming video is lagging 🙁

are u have a Yahoo messengger or any ? Maybe we can chat about filmmaking. In my country it have a limited source about filmmaking.

PS : Sory for my bad english, still learning 🙂