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(@kozinski)
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Hey all,

Just recently released my first short film (although it's 25 minutes long!)

Would appreciate if any of you could swing by and give it a view and all comments will be welcomed 🙂

You can find it here... ?url? http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=2040941972?/url?

Cheers
Paul
Life of Him

 
Posted : 14/07/2007 2:17 pm
(@rizzo)
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Loved it. Excellent concept, really well executed. The mix of emotion in the film was great, from laugh out loud funny to lump in your throat tragedy. Well done!

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There's daggers in mens' smiles

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There's daggers in men's smiles

 
Posted : 14/07/2007 10:24 pm
(@kozinski)
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Hey Rizzo - thanks for watching, and for your kind comments 🙂

 
Posted : 15/07/2007 11:53 am
(@danstin-studios)
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It was amazing. I loaded it and started watching with no intention of watching for much more than the first 30 seconds, and ended up watching it from start to finish. It was so captivating that I actually watched until the last hiss from audio was done at the end. It was truly beautiful and displayed human emotion so well. It stepped back and looked at us, shallow and deep, from a removed perspective, while at the same time involving us so deeply. I could go on until this rivaled the length of the movie, but I won't. The only problem, if you could even call it that, that I had was the soundtrack. It was beautiful, and very compelling, but when you went from person to person it would fade out well, then the sound that transitioned would be too loud. I thought it should be taken down a little, and then maybe you could find a way to transition one piece into another, so that the music either faded into the next piece, or maybe have a musical bridge for each piece. Just a suggestion, though otherwise it was awesome.

"We all have the potential to be great. It is our inability to do so that makes us miserable." C.S.Lewis

"We all have the potential to be great. It is our inability to do so that makes us miserable." C.S.Lewis

 
Posted : 15/07/2007 7:04 pm
(@director958)
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It was very good, there might have been a lot of swearing, but it was very compeling. It sort of reminded me of The Catcher in the Rye. I really liked that book.

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Matthew Wesley Miller

 
Posted : 16/07/2007 2:14 am
(@kozinski)
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Thanks for the kind comments guys - they are really appreciated 🙂

 
Posted : 16/07/2007 4:16 pm
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