Hey everyone! My friend and I have began writing a bunch of comedic shorts that we are forming into a few mini-series. We actually filmed our first one, and just recently put it up for the public to see. Of course, we think our stuff is great - but we're not really doing it for our own amusement.. which is why we want your opinions! Please let us know what you think. Give us your honest critiques - we want to know what you did and didn't like and perhaps how we could improve.

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