From the upcoming indie feature, "Terms of Azimuth" being shot in San Diego...comments, questions?
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Originally posted by bcameron
From the upcoming indie feature, "Terms of Azimuth" being shot in San Diego...comments, questions?
Ha, I see what you did there with your font choice. ?8D?
haha, I'd suggest to try and make the text look a little bit more "drawn" "worn" or "printed" to disguise it a bit from pure blaring Comic Sans MS. This might be a bit of a personal thing (I usually dislike when I can recognize a font), but if other people don't notice it directly they're bound to, especially with such a popular font, sense an unusual familiarity with it which may put them off.
It would also be nice to hear a bit about the story, or at least some intriguing bits of dialogue. It kind of feels like a commercial for a new episode of an established TV series, where the fans are the target audience and the premise and story are already assumed to be understood. In this case I don't think that is working, at least with no dialog, because it just left me a bit uncertain about what to think.
Take my opinions with a grain of salt though. And I did enjoy it (photography sure looks nice!), I just think there are some things that could be improved on to make it more endearing.
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