Hi everyone, I am new to the forum and would love your comments on my new short comedy "Volunteers?"
?url? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E7aBQ4JLk38?/url?

I also have a more experimental science fiction short that I just finished "A Rivulet in Time"
?url? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9MVGoBufBYM&feature=relmfu?/url?

I would love any comments or critiques that you have.

Ryan Lebar
http://quarkandbeans.blogspot.com/
www.rlebar.com