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Trailer For My First Film. Please Review

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(@mfinlin)
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Hey folks. Check out the trailer to my first film shot in the Asian metropolis of Kaohsiung Taiwan. Looking for feedback and hopes to work with people and find work in New York. Hope you like it.

http://www.theglassboxmovie.com

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?Now more than ever we need to talk to each other, to listen to each other and understand how we see the world, and cinema is the best medium for doing this.? -Scorsese

?Now more than ever we need to talk to each other, to listen to each other and understand how we see the world, and cinema is the best medium for doing this.? -Scorsese

 
Posted : 15/10/2008 7:45 pm
(@filmnewbie)
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I enjoyed it... really great I think and the music is awesome...

 
Posted : 04/11/2008 7:16 am
(@irving-thatcher)
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Looks fantastic but it's hard to grasp the story. And that's what the trailer is all about. You might want to add a voice over as we are also not hearing any of the actors. Yes there is text of course, but the concept doesn't break though even with the text, a voice over will drive it home and connect with an audience. It doesn't have to be a cliche vo either, it can be anything you want. Maybe the leads reading the text, or whispering it, or yelling it... who knows.

 
Posted : 08/01/2009 8:18 pm
(@bradyheyen)
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Yeah that looks great. It really leaves the viewers wanting to know more. Where did you get the music?

 
Posted : 27/05/2009 1:02 pm
(@aspiring-mogul)
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It's incredible! But, yes, the trailer should tell us what the story is about.

 
Posted : 27/05/2009 1:32 pm
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