This is supposed to be one of my BIGGEST project ever. But I feel that this thing is missing something... and at times awkward... If you guys can point out what im missing and what needs to change i'd really appreciate it!

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This is my first time making a music video. I did everything (edit, filming, acting, playing, recording).

Im hoping through this I can excite people around me and recruit them into something bigger! This is very important to me, so please give in your sincere thoughts Thanks ?:)?

I know I obviously need to add some more materials into this video. I'd thought i'd provide my story line along with some lyrical translations. Any new suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

Two young couples argue constantly because they are stubborn with their own ways. The singer is obviously deeply hurt and misses the girl very much, she'd wait for her call. But once the phone call comes, he does not know what to say rather than "hello?" . In the end, they sticked to their "separate ways"...

"You claim that I have hurt you, though you flaunt your superiority to others"
"Perhaps only a hug/ a close touch could remedy this regret/damage. Unfortunately, it cannot be reached"