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(@magnaprods)
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Agents, guns, secrets and the strength you get from being betrayed.
Rough ride for everyone, especially for one sneaky traitor.

Any comments welcomed!

 
Posted : 20/02/2009 1:43 pm
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Excellent framing. I would try some stablized shots though, especially for the far away views. Some of the motion was a bit too much as well. also, there's a rule in film that helps the viewer understand the surroundings. It's hard to explain but here's a link:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/180_degree_rule

In the "sneaking around" scene where both gunmen are hiding from each other, it was pretty confusing when the went from tree to tree because all the trees look the same to the viewer. So unless you were trying to fool the viewers on purpose, stick to that rule. Lastly, I didn't really understand the plot. At all. But I enjoyed it hahah. Great work.

What equipment did you use for this? (camera, audio, lighting, editing software, etc.)

Hope I could help.

 
Posted : 27/05/2009 1:17 pm
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