Hi there, I'm new to the forum. I was hoping I could get some feedback about a short movie/pilot I've made and recently started adding to Youtube. The first 2 parts are up already and I'll be adding the 3rd this week.

It's about a girl who gets confused with her own sexuality and goes on a downward spiral of self destruction with her good friend Al trying to help her out.

Part 1:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vTQ_0ktnYOA

and
Part 2:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oLRj0aGcuaA

I'll add part 3 to this post once it's up. Thanks in advance for all comments.