Hi, Here is a short action movie I made with some friends. It uses Nerf Guns which can fire real bullets! Check it out here: ?url? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=06IVJwUMbO0?/url?. Please tell me if you like it or if there are any improvements we could make. Our website is ?url? http://aftereffectsmovies.blogspot.com?/url? Remember to Like, Comment and Subscribe to help us continue making movies.
I unfortunately have several criticisms.
1. The blood was too extreme, and appears to come from nowhere because there is no blood on the wardrobe or spray on the face or injuries from the head shots.
2. The muzzle flare was huge
3. Both the blood and the muzzle flare appear flat, there is no sense of depth
4. The guns seem weird, because they are orange. It would have looked better if you had taken time to paint them up and make them look nice.
I encourage you to keep working at it, and in the future your work will improve.
Cheers?:)?
making low budget dreams come true
making low budget dreams come true
